Tuesday, March 30, 2010

compostion :parragraff

MISS SWEET I RED YOUR COMMTS AND I WROT BACK OTHER COMMENT.
NOW I WANT TO WRIT A NEW COMMENT ABOUT A ONE LECTURE IN CLASSES WEEKS AGO,THIS A PARRAGRAF WITH DIFFERENTS CONCLUSSIONS:WITH CAME OF THE DOOAR WAS A TIGER,IT WAS A BIG ONE AND VERY,VERY DANGEROUSLY;IT WENT TO FAST OVER THE MAN AND DEVORED IT. AFTER THE MAN DIED , ALL THE BELLS RANG VERY SAD AND THE WOMAN CRIYING TOO; TOO MANY PEOPLE WENT WALKING TO THE DIFFERENTS HOUSES.AFTER A} THE PRINCES SELECTED GIRL FOR THE PRINCEP B}THE PRINCESS LIKES A BEATIFUL GIRL FOR THE PRINCEP AND THE LAST ONE SHE NEVER KNEW{THE PRINCESS}WHO THE GIRL WOLD BE PRICEP WILL BE MARRIED ,WHATEVER,BUT SHE LIKED AND SELECTED THE WOMAN FOR HIM.

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  1. Nice Felipe! Even I didn't understand well I encourage you to keep going and try to write more. that will be helpful for you!
    GoOd luck my Brother:)

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