Tuesday, April 20, 2010

COMPOSITION:PARRAGRAPF

MISS SWEET I READ YOUR COMMENTS AND I WROTE BACK OTHER COMMENT.
NOW I WANT TO WRIT A NEW COMMENT ABOUT ONE LECTURE IN CLASS DIFFERENTS CONCLUSSIONS:WITH CAME OF THE DOOAR WAS A TIGER,IT WAS A BIG ONE AND VERY,VERY DANGEROUS;IT WENT TO QUICKLY OVER TO THE MAN AND DEVOURET IT. AFTER THE MAN DIED , ALL THE BELLS RANG VERY SAD AND THE WOMAN CRIYING TOO; MANY PEOPLE WENT WALKING TO THE DIFFERENT HOUSES.AFTER A} THE PRINCES SELECTED ITGIRL FOR THE PRINCE B}THE PRINCESS LIKES A BEATIFUL GIRL FOR THE PRINCE THE LAST ONE SHE NEVER KNEW{THE PRINCESS}WHO THE GIRL THE PRINCE WOULD MARRY. , I THINK SHE LIKED THE WOMAN FOR HIM.

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